No One Dies Forever
Friday, April 12, 2019
IS THIS POEM BAD OR GREAT?
i feel hesitance
for the present tense
the past passed past
too fast
and the future
is a computer
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Thomas
April 19, 2019 at 3:27 PM
GREAT! :D
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Tesse Wolfson
May 21, 2020 at 2:47 PM
I guess the jury's still out.
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Anonymous
March 9, 2023 at 11:54 AM
jury reconvened. final verdict: it's great!
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GREAT! :D
ReplyDeleteI guess the jury's still out.
ReplyDeletejury reconvened. final verdict: it's great!
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